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[: Math Metal :]

uhhh

never really watched these before, never will.

ok animation kinda boring

BTW first review

[FULL Sprite tut! V3]

you get it first...

first off, YOU need to know how to use sprites before you teach others.

secondly, show some examples instead of just showing text

thirdly, there are plenty of tutorials already, i would suggest spending your time elsewhere.

kartmaster9607 responds:

fuck you

[Pass-my-Flash 1]

Sweet...

Man this was cool. i have to say nice work guys, you really pulled it off.

["PASSED"]

great story...

you had a great story,

but i think you could have but a bit more effort in the actual animtation

Rutger responds:

Well thanks, I'll try to put more effort in a new short I'm planning.

[Slick: Showdown]

ups and downs...

the animation is good, but i think you could have used less tweening and more frame-by-frame. because when he was spining he was very stiff looking, make him more flexible (you can only accomplish this when using frame-by-frame). besides that the drawing was great.

Slick-Productions responds:

Thanks! I actually did fbf all but one of the times he spun (that being the one where it goes slow-mo) because I thought that's what it would look like. But more flexible? Thanks for the tip! And thanks for the compliments otherwise!

[Random Bob 1: In The Pub]

you have the ability...

you have a ton of animating potintial!

Just make more effort and have a story next time

[Truncheon's Party]

i htkn i suffored from i miner seizer...

to much lights... AUG!!

try harder next time

[Fish Take Over The World]

not to good...

I'm really sorry usually i don't leave bad reviews.

But here are a couple of things people like to see in flash:

* GOOD animations (not just fades)
* sound
* an actual dialog
* just because you learned how to draw weird things, doesn't mean it looks good in an animation
* if you like making comic-like things, you can. it's just people like to see:
* bright Colors
* Music
* a good story
* Some animation

I hope these tips help you with future animation

BrokenVoice responds:

I know it was shit wasn't it.

[Salad Fingers Episode 8]

Amazing...

...Man, it's so awesome to see how much salad fingers has evolved since your first one.

*Still Creepy
*Quite disturbing (along with your userpic)
*random

[Another Sequel]

just a ton of things people needed to see

i am so glad you posted this there is a lot of fun real life facts that are in this

Ps need to UPDATE SITE!!!

PPS you finally saw umm... Saw yay :)

squeakytoad responds:

Ha, yeah, that site is in desperate need of work. I'm such a lousy procrastinator.